Hi Mackenzie! I am Laura from yaldhurst school. Wow what an amazing blog I really liked the way you told me about what you can do when you are in the yellow zone. Did you think about the color of the text? Next time you could make the text a different color so I can read it!
Hi Mackenzie, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu. I like your poster. What did you use to make it? Was it google slides, drawings? Will make more of these posters? Kind regards, Bella
Hi Mackenzie, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you have added characters in the yellow zone. Did you think about making other characters. Next time, you could add more words of silly or scared.
Kia ora, I'm Renae fromm Yaldhurst School. Your Poster is amazing and it stands out in your blog post. Did you think about adding in more writing and why you have been learning about. and do you like it. I could not really read the writing in the poster so next time you could make it lighter or darker. Do You like making the posters ? Bye. -Renae Awesome blog post.
Hi Mackenzie this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school This is a good blog because how have those a feeling that people have. You need a capital letter at the start of the sentes. and for the writing of the yellow zone I can not read the writing because it is yellow as the back ground. Kind regards Michaela
Kia Ora Mackenzie! I am Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
and that is a super colourful blog post!
I really like how you decided to add not only words of how you feel when you are in the 'Zellow Zone', but also pictures too. I also like how you have decided to add different colours to make the blog post pop (in a way).
I reckon that this blog post will be helpful to lots of people, this is because it will help people to express their mixed feelings. And doing that just by saying "I am in the Yellow Zone".
In order to make this blog post even better, I think that it would help if you could add a bit more of a description. Maybe you could have told us how you learn't about the 'Yellow Zone'? I also think that you could try to change the colours so that they are not the same colour as the background, this would make it easier to read.
Apart from that, I think that you have done a fantastic blog post!
Hi Mackenzie! I am Delilah from yaldhurst school. Wow what an amazing blog I really liked the way you told me about what you can do when you are in the yellow zone. Did you think about the color of the text? Next time you could make the text a different color so I can read it!
We have been learning how to identify feelings and how to deal with them. This is my red zone poster. In the red zone you can feel angry and you might need space.
Hi Mackenzie! I am Laura from yaldhurst school.
ReplyDeleteWow what an amazing blog I really liked the way you told me about what you can do when you are in the yellow zone.
Did you think about the color of the text?
Next time you could make the text a different color so I can read it!
Kind regards Laura from yms.
Hi Mackenzie, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI like your poster. What did you use to make it? Was it google slides, drawings? Will make more of these posters?
Kind regards,
Bella
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added photos of how you would feel if you were in the yellow zone.
Did you think about making the writing white.
Next time, you could write a little bit more.
(: Kind Regards Jorja :)
Hi Mackenzie, I'm Zahrah from Yaldhurst Model School. I like the way you have added characters in the yellow zone. Did you think about making other characters. Next time, you could add more words of silly or scared.
ReplyDeleteRegards, Zahrah!
Kia ora, I'm Renae fromm Yaldhurst School.
ReplyDeleteYour Poster is amazing and it stands out in your blog post.
Did you think about adding in more writing and why you have been learning about. and do you like it.
I could not really read the writing in the poster so next time you could make it lighter or darker.
Do You like making the posters ?
Bye.
-Renae
Awesome blog post.
Hi Mackenzie this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteThis is a good blog because how have those a feeling that people have.
You need a capital letter at the start of the sentes.
and for the writing of the yellow zone I can not read the writing because it is yellow as the back ground.
Kind regards
Michaela
Kia Ora Mackenzie! I am Sam from Yaldhurst Model School,
ReplyDeleteand that is a super colourful blog post!
I really like how you decided to add not only words of how you feel when you are in the 'Zellow Zone', but also pictures too. I also like how you have decided to add different colours to make the blog post pop (in a way).
I reckon that this blog post will be helpful to lots of people, this is because it will help people to express their mixed feelings. And doing that just by saying "I am in the Yellow Zone".
In order to make this blog post even better, I think that it would help if you could add a bit more of a description. Maybe you could have told us how you learn't about the 'Yellow Zone'? I also think that you could try to change the colours so that they are not the same colour as the background, this would make it easier to read.
Apart from that, I think that you have done a fantastic blog post!
Happy Blogging!
Sam
Hi Mackenzie! I am Delilah from yaldhurst school.
ReplyDeleteWow what an amazing blog I really liked the way you told me about what you can do when you are in the yellow zone.
Did you think about the color of the text?
Next time you could make the text a different color so I can read it!
keep the great work up
kind regards
Delilah (: